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Cloven sequel to Myst Little Pony

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"Thank heavens thou hath returned. W-we need thy help. There's a great deal of history that thou should know, but We're afraid that... we must act quickly.
                Here. Most of what thou will need to know is in there. Keep it well hidden.
                For reasons thou shall discover, We can't send thee with a way out. But, We can give thee this. It appears to be a gift from his brother... but it's actually a link to Tartarus. Thou shall have need of it, We're afraid, to capture Tirek. Once thou hath found Luna, signal me and We'll come and bring thee back.
                ...There's also a chance, if this all goes well, that We might be able to get thee back to the place that thou came from."



I don't know how long it took to come up with a replacement title for Riven that would also be a pun. In this case riven refers to a forced divide, like the star fissure. Cloven is a cleft hoof, which is divided down the middle, and Tirek has cloven hooves. It's a stretch but I did the best I could with what I had. It even has the "V" from Riven as well, which is nice.

Original intro: www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lza_VW…

Edit #1: Realized I forgot sunbutts cutie mark, fixed.

Edit #2: While several comments correct me on the use of archaic English, Luna only uses them sparingly in the Nightmare Night episode. I did use "hath" incorrectly, however the show simply used "have" rather than "hast".

Though, I'm starting to understand Rarities plight a little more. www.youtube.com/watch?v=TJ5dXX…
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So cool. I recently started re-obsessing over Riven and and I like this a lot. The title is spot-on.